The Art of Deception
or Pride and Extreme Prejudice
Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors. This week continues a spy story set in late Georgian England, the year before Trafalgar. Last week the two men discussed Lucy and Alice as they trudged back to the Pelican for a supper of dubious sausages washed down with excellent beer. Their discussion has borne fruit this week when Lucy receives an invitation for an excursion.
A message awaited Miss Haytor when she awoke Tuesday, “Mr Spode invites her and a companion, to ride with him and Mr Stanton; perhaps to see the Grenville monument, but certainly to take some exercise in the fresh air, away from the smells and smoke of Bath.”
“Could we?”
Miss Aldershot studied Lucinda, “What else does it say?”
“Merely that if riding were out of the question, he could hire a chariot; failing that, he’d meet us at the Bath; I should so like to ride.”
She stalled for time to think, “What do you think Alice?”
“It would get the two of them away from the Pelican; I’d be happy to, um, investigate their rooms while they are … detained by other activities.”
Martha smiled, “That is an idea, but no; I think it best, Alice, that I investigate your friends; you’ll enjoy the ride far more than I ever could and that dashing Mr Stanton won’t be tempted to cry off if you’re there.”
“If you insist.”
“I do, besides people are far less likely to remember a frumpy old maid poking around the Pelican than a pretty young thing like you.”
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My apologies for creative punctuation.

Sir Bevill Grenville fought for the royalists at the battle of Landsdown during the English civil war. The parliamentarian army camped on the hill overlooking Bath. Sir Bevill died, leading his regiment of Cornish pikemen, in fierce hand to hand combat. Unfortunately, for the royalists that is, they lost. This battle was one of several turning points in the civil war. Had the royalists won, they would have held onto the southwest. His good friend, the poet William Cartwright – who would also die fighting for the royal side, wrote the elegy that is inscribed on the column.
This was not Nature’s courage nor that thing,
We valour call which Time and Reason bring,
But a diviner fury fierce and high,
Valour transported into Ecstasy.
Like poor Cecelia, “The Curious Profession of Dr Craven” is back from the dead.
I’ve released a sweet regency romance, Miss DeVere This is a fun read.
Frankenkitty is available.
What happens when teenagers get to play with Dr Frankenstien’s lab notebooks, a few odd chemicals and a great big whopping coil? Mayhem, and possibly an invitation to the Transylvanian Neuroscience Summer School.
So the women are suspicious of the men and the men are suspicious of the women. Sounds like the battle of the sexes, all right.
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Of course. Just because it’s 1804 doesn’t mean there’s a truce.
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Sounds like they are up to no good to me. I look forward to reading more.
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thank you.
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I cannot argue with Martha’s logic. The young and pretty attract attention at the best of times… Besides, where would the fun be with a frumpy chaperone…
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It will turn out to be important that Alice is a good rider.
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Sounds like shenanigans are afoot on all sides! I wonder if the girls will pull this off?
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They’ll find something interesting.
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Plots and counterplots running rampant inagoodway. Loved the excerpt, this story is so much fun to watch unfold.
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They’re each trying to trip the others up. Thank you.
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Yup. This sounds like trouble. Great snippet! 😀
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Thank you.
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Yes, an old maid is less conspicuous.
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Thank you. She’s not quite as invisible as she thinks.
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Martha sounds like she knows what she’s on about – I wonder what she’ll find in the course of her ‘poking around’!
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Nothing is almost as suspicious as something.
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This can’t be good. lol
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Thank you.
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Oh, now I wonder what they will find and what the boys are trying to hide. O.o
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